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The AI framework for perfect headlines
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Hey optimizer!
I hope you're absolutely crushing it this week because we've got some GAME-CHANGING content coming your way! 🚀
In this packed edition, I'm sharing my AI framework for writing high-converting headlines plus 8 simple tweaks to supercharge your ecommerce homepage that are delivering massive results.
Keep scrolling for all the golden nuggets that'll take your conversion rates to the next level!
Highlights of Today’s Newsletter
Design: How to kickstart A/B testing and increase velocity
The Chosen Topic: The AI framework that writes high-converting Headlines
CRO Insight: Write high-converting copy like a CRO pro
Video: 8 simple tweaks to supercharge your ecommerce homepage
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Events 🌆
Unlock the Biggest CRO Wins – Free Workshop for Ecom Brands
We’re pulling back the curtain on the biggest winning CRO tests we’ve ever run—tests that consistently delivered massive revenue growth across multiple brands.
These aren’t just one-off wins; they’re proven strategies that can be replicated to scale your business.
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Unlock & Convert: The CRO Breakfast by ConversionWise
📅 Date: Thursday, March 20, 2025
⏰ Time: 8:30 AM - 10:30 AM
📍 Location: YOLK HOUSE, 103 Farringdon Road
Join 20+ DTC brand leaders for a high-impact breakfast and workshop focused on CRO strategies that drive higher conversion rates, revenue, AOV, and LTV in 2025.
What to Expect:
✅ Actionable strategies for landing page optimization & design-led CRO
✅ Insights on scaling conversion without high-velocity A/B testing
✅ Networking with top DTC brands over breakfast
🎤 Featured Speaker: Liza Hudson (CRO Specialist, ConversionWise)
Design 🎨
How to kickstart A/B testing and increase velocity (Link)
This quick redesign instantly made the product page look smoother and more professional (Link)
The surprising way to turn around negative test results (Link)
CRO Around the Web 🌐
Shopify: Customizable Home metrics now available on the Shopify app (Source)
Baymard: Desktop UX Trends: 10 Common Pitfalls & Best Practices (Source)
Why In-House CRO Fails

I've seen countless brands struggle when bringing CRO in-house.
Here’s what typically happens:
1. You decide to build an internal CRO team
2. You assign it to your existing marketing or dev team
3. You run a few tests but see little to no impact
4. You realize CRO is way more complex than expected
5. You outsource it back to the experts
Why does this happen?
It's like trying to run a Michelin-starred restaurant with no trained chefs.
Imagine opening a high-end restaurant, but:
→ The kitchen is understaffed
→ You don’t have the right ingredients
→ The head chef is also managing customer service
→ There’s no quality control on the dishes
The result? Disaster.
That’s exactly why CRO requires a dedicated team, not just a side project.
So what’s the smarter approach?
✅ Leverage experienced CRO specialists
✅ Use proven frameworks & data-driven insights
✅ Continuously test, refine, and optimize
This allows you to:
→ Maximize conversions without wasting time
→ Avoid costly trial and error
→ See faster, measurable results
High-Converting Design Inspiration

Your landing page could be converting better.
But like most brands, this brand wasn’t using key CRO principles to drive more sales.
Here’s how we transformed their page:
1/ Trust Optimization
→ Added a 30-day money-back guarantee notice bar
→ Highlighted thousands of positive reviews for instant credibility
→ Strengthened trust with a clear social proof section
2/ Visual Hierarchy Upgrade
→ Big, bold fonts for better readability
→ Strong value proposition: “Give your chickens the ultimate superfood boost”
→ High-quality product image above the fold
→ Clear CTA with a directional cue to drive action
3/ Content Optimization
→ Replaced tiny fonts with easy-to-read text
→ Improved button visibility for seamless navigation
→ Benefit-driven bullet points to reinforce the offer
Landing pages should do two things:
1. Clearly communicate value in seconds
2. Make taking action effortless
Most brands overlook these simple fixes.
We optimize for impact.
CRO Insight
Write high-converting copy like a CRO pro

The AI Framework That Writes High-Converting Headlines
If you want to write headlines that stop the scroll and drive clicks, you need a proven AI prompt framework.
This system will help you create headlines that hook, engage, and convert:
Step 1: Core Prompt Structure
Start with target audience
Include product/service type
Specify desired outcome
Add tone of voice
Set character limit
Step 2: Variation Commands
Tell AI to generate these 4 types:
Benefit-driven | Problem-solution | Curiosity | Social proof |
---|---|---|---|
End result focus | Pain point focus | Question-based | Numbers/results |
Step 3: Power Elements
Include these triggers in prompt:
Specific numbers
Time frames
Objection handling
Unique mechanism
Proof elements
Example Prompt:
"Write 5 headlines for [product] targeting [audience] that:
Focus on [main benefit]
Include [proof point]
Address [main objection]
Use [tone] voice
Max 65 characters"
Step 4: Testing Framework
Generate variations with:
Different power words
Various angles
Multiple benefits
Diverse hooks
A/B options
Step 5: Optimization Loop
Refine based on:
Click rates | Engagement | Conversion | Feedback | Competition |
---|---|---|---|---|
Top performers | Social proof | Sales data | User response | Market analysis |
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